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Goodbye, Goodnight

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As the bass gets louder I walk closer to the speaker
Blasting out my eardrum
It’s worth it
Is it worth it?
Do I see you?
I smell your perfume
Is that you at the end of the bar?
Holding the rum and coke in one hand and an unlit cigarette in the other
A man walks up to you
It’s not me
I don’t know him
“Want a light?”
I read his lips
He wants more than that
“Want a drink? Let me buy you a drink.”
I’m jealous
You’re giving him the attention I’ve always wanted from you
You get up
I feel like a predator
You’re my prey
I’m stalking you
I want you
I watch as you walk away
Grinding against him on the dance floor
You look up
Our eyes meet
Moving away from the speaker I’ve become deaf
“Come to me” your eyes beg
I’m enthralled by that look you give me
It might not even be for me, but I come towards you anyway
I see you
You see me
You lean into him
My eyes never leave you
A kiss
Some tongue
Why?
Why do you do this to me?
“Come with me?” I ask
Nothing
No response
You had me your drink and walk away with him
Thanks.
I drink it as if it’s mine
One gulp and it’s gone
A night without you is always the same
I wrote this on a whim.


Basically I had some thoughts after watching the movie 21 ([link]), don't ask if they have no relation to the movie. Wandering thoughts does that to a person.


This could become something more, but I figured I'd post this one if I were to change it.

Also, I'd like to add that the beginning of this I am IN LOVE with, so I hope you enjoy it.
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